lunes, 21 de mayo de 2018

Writing contest 4th Edition

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  1. The Mistake

    We arrived at Escuela de Lenguas at 8am on a Friday. We had been called because somebody had committed suicide. This case had been given to my two partners and me because we had solved a lot of cases like this.
    The first thing that we saw was that the body had a suicide note in English on top of it said, “It’s all my fault. I doesn't deserve to live”.
    One of us went to investigate the life of the dead person, who was an English teacher at Escuela de Lenguas, and my partner and me stayed in the building to ask questions to all the people who worked there. Because they were a lot, we made them write a statement about the last time they had seen the teacher.
    While we were reading the statements, the one who went to investigate the teacher’s life arrived, and told us that the teacher had had a happy life and he had had a lot of plans for his future, so he couldn’t have wanted to kill himself.
    We didn’t understand what had happened. We were looking at the table where all the clues were displayed. When suddenly, we noticed that one of the statements had the same handwriting as the one on the suicide letter. Also, at that moment we noticed that the letter had an obvious mistake. Instead of “don’t”, the suicide had put “doesn’t”. This kind of mistake was very serious to have been made by an English teacher. Our conclusion was that the owner of that statement was the killer, and it was someone from Escuela de Lenguas.

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  2. Unexpected Encounter

    It was July of 2001, a good winter for the city, but the worst for escuela de lenguas. Why? A lot of uncommon things were happening. On friday 12th, a secretary came into a room and saw a lot of blood on the walls and a prhase written on them, which said, "I JUST WANTED TO FINISH". A week later, the main room was burned, there were many books inside. Fortunately nobody was hurt.
    All the staff was worried, but they tried to hide this event and solve the case on their own. Until the pet of Escuela de Lenguas was killed. Poor Benny, the cat. The head teacher was very angry, she didn´t know what to do. Someone told her about John Celip, the best detective in the country. So she called him.
    John went to the institute, talked with the head teacher, and then he knew what to do, so he started working. He interrogated the pupils, the secretaries, the teachers, and the rest of the staff. He searched for clues in all the building, but he didn´t find anything. He thought about investigating former pupils, and he found something: there had been a student that never finished the engilsh course. His name was Thomas Brod. The only thing that was known about him was that he disappeared after failing the final test for the sixth time.
    The detective realized something: all the things that had been happening, had happened inside the school. He made a plan, searched the school during the night, when no one was there. He thought that someone could have been doing those things at the night, to hurt escuela de lenguas.
    The next day, the detective waited until everyone left and followed his plan. He started searching the classrooms, but didn´t find anything. Next he searched the bathrooms, but nothing appeared either. He stopped a moment to think and saw a piece of wood on the floor, a very suspicious one. He pulled up, and then, he found it, a room hidden under the ground! He went down the stairs and met with a lot of disorder. He couldn´t see much on the darkness, but he saw a shape of an old an dirty man. Suddenly that man showed himself and he was Thomas Brod! John fought with him, handcuffed him and then he called the police.
    The detective had managed to solve the problem at last.The old pupil told the judge that he had been living under the ground for ten years, planning his revenge. The judge sentenced him to thirty years in prison, and gave a sum of $1.000 to escuela de lenguas.
    John Celip keep doing his job with other cases, and the english institute returned to normality. Everthing had ended well, aparently...

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  3. Where were the things?

    Everything changed when the School of Languages opened. All the children from the city started to take classes in this school because the level was really good. The school has nice teaching staff and it was a friendly place. None of the students wanted to meet a class and everyone had a good time until one day in June, when the school changed and strange things started to happen.
    Things disappeared, for example, the books which were in the library or the whiteboards in the classrooms.
    Some people said that the things had been stolen by some students because they wanted to play a joke on the teachers but none on the teachers, but none of the teachers were able to find the person who was guilty of stealing things.
    Nobody understood why the things disappeared, so one day the school head teacher decided to call the police the next day the police. The next day, the police went to the school with a detective. He started to ask all the people who worked and studied there about what had been happening.
    After many days of work, he found that the one who was guilty couldn't be a student. 'It must have been a teacher',he thought, because there weren't any students who wanted to have that number of books and boards and TV sets, too.
    So he decided to interrogate all the staff again and he found that one teacher had stolen these things. The detective asked the police to go to the thief's house to look for the things which the teacher had stolen. When the police arrived at the teacher's house, they knocked at the door and no one answered. Even though the teacher, who was inside, said that she was innocent of this crime, the police knocked down the door. Finally the police found the stolen things, and gave them back to the school.

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  4. The missing student
    As every Thursday at 3:10 p.m., my English classmates and I were attending classes at Escuela de Lenguas. It was a cloudy day, and it looked like something unexpected was going to happen at any time. However, we were having fun, it was a usual English Class.
    At 3:30 we were allowed to have our break, but we decided not to go downstairs nor get out of the school because of the weather, except for one of us: Emilia.
    Emilia was such a restless person, she couldn´t stand still longer than thirty minutes.
    She went downstairs, she even talked to the receptionists. Afterwards she went to the toilet (according to witnesses) and then nobody saw her getting out of there. We phoned her about twenty times, twice each one of us, because we were about to continue with lessons, but no answer was given.
    Everyone in the classroom went downstairs as fast as we could, but she was neither in the toilet nor in the corridor. We looked for her in every corner of the building. The Police arrived but they didn´t get any better results.
    Definitively, she was gone.

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  5. As soon as I opened the bathroom door I knew something was wrong.
    It was half past four and there were thirty minutes leftfor French class to begin. I dicided to go tonthe kiosk and buy something to eat, so I did.
    When I came back I went to the bathroom door to wash my hands but the onlyone that was opend was the teacher's one; I entered.
    There was a weird smell, when I turned on the light Mrs Jane was lying in a pool of blood, I ran and called the Police.
    It had already been a week when came out in te newspaper " The strange case of the English teacher was solved "
    "A few days ago an English teacher was found dead by a student in the bathroom;everything pointed at the concierge.
    Mr Robert, who had been the Principal of the school for 8 years, had retired from that position and a vacancy was left. He had promise to the concierge that he would be the next Principal, because he had been loyal to his job and a very good friend. But Robert, soon fell in love with Jane, and he would do anything to conques her, such as offering her the position of headmistress.
    When the concierge figure that out, he killed Jane, but he didn't have time to hide the body because a student was in school early and he had seen her. The concierge tried to erase all evidence and made sure that Robert didn't suspect him. But Ana, one of Jane's friends; kwen all the story.
    She told everything to the police and they could catch the concierge, who, after a long time, confessed what he had done."
    When I read it, I was surprised because he had always been so nice with me and even there was a day when he bought me a bar of chocolate for my birthday. Now I know that we can't trust anybody.

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  7. Strange events

    During the last winter in the city of La Plata strange events started ro happen in a very quiet place: The School of Languages.
    This School had manu students and was such a nice place to study, everyone had a helpful attitude with each other.
    One day, a student at the School of Languages disappeared; his name was Martin. He was fifteen years old. Hundreds of people in the city were looking for Martin bur no one heard anything about him ever again.
    After three months, two more students at the School of Languages, Sofia and Federico disappeared. They were fifteen years old too. They were never seen again.
    The city, the school, families, friends and people in general were very touched by those cases.
    The police started an investigation focused on all the teachers at the School of Languages. The investigation lasted three months and they didn't get any clue, until an undercover police officer made his own investigation and found out something really interesting.
    One of the oldest teachers who worked at the School of Languages was part of a secret sect that was known for kidnapping children to offer them as a sacrifice.
    The undercover police officer called Julian hadn't had any clue either, but he followed the teacher every day and every night for an entire month. After two weeks Julian went to the police station with all the evidence he had collected. But the rest of the police officers didn't start the investigation of the teacher because they had to look for someone else first: Julian.
    Julian disappeared and was never found again.
    Teenagers kept disappearing. And the teacher... is still working at the School of Languages, surrounded by... teenagers.

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  8. in 700 B.C, a big group of people lived in a large village and they were harassed by witches and monsters and they weree frightened about that. One day, a young woman disappeared from the village,and the people decided to stop that kingdom of horror and deaath. They did some research, and they discovered that witches and monsters could be captured and murdered.
    Four years later they had created an elite group that captured witches and monsters to torture and kill them. Five years later this little elite group had tortured five hundred witches and burned seven hundred witches and monsters who lived in a reduced area.
    One thousand seven hundred and eighteen years later, in that reduced area, agroup of peopledecides to build a language school, but what they didnt´t known was that in that the souls of thousands witches inhabited that piece of land.
    One day a little boy was walking into the language school when he heard a scream coming from the second floor. He went to the second floor and got into a classroom. A few minutes later, the teacher went into the classroom and found the body of this boy, he was die and hand an expression of horror on his face.
    Later a private detective arrived at the language school and started to investigate the crime scene, but he couldn´t solve the mystery and he did some research on the building. In the library at the language school he found a papyrus that explained that the piecen of land where the school was build had been used to burn witches. After that, the detective called an exorcist and thge building was purifiyied and the souls of the witches left the language school, but while they were leaving the language school, they said that they would come back.

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  9. Everything started here, in “Escuela de Lenguas”, before the winter holidays. More exactly on the 4th of July. It was Tuesday afternoon, I was with my classmates in room 12, from where you can see another house. When the class started we began to hear noises from that house. We all looked out to see what was happening but nothing. When the recess started we went to the sidewalk, and after five minutes we heard a scream, it was a woman. Everyone, even the guard, went upstairs. At first we saw a very heavy book from the library with blood and then we saw a teacher dead on the floor. We quickly went to the library to ask about the book. When we got inside, we found a piece of paper that said: "I did It, you know now but you will never find me”.
    Do you believe that the killer was ever found? Who do you think was the murderer?

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  10. Two years ago something strange happened at "Escuela de Lenguas". Something that called the attention of all the students. That year, a student found a dead woman in the bathroom. He panicked, so he left "Escuela de Lenguas" and nobody knew about him anymore.
    After this, the police started to investigate the case, and they discovered that the woman had being poisoned, so they wanted to find who poisoned her and why.
    After a long time searching for information, they discovered that the woman was poisoned by the porter. The police asked him some questions and afterwards the porter was taken to prison because he poisoned the woman without any reason, because he was crazy.
    Now it's only a story to tell but at that moment it was an horrible situation for teachers and students at "Escuela de Lenguas". The porter is still in prison, and the police stopped investigating the case last year.

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  11. The missing tests

    It was a cold Thursday morning, and I was with two workmates in the patrol. We have been called from a School of Languages because of a theft: someone had entered a few hours ago and the tests were missing. We arrived at our destiny and as soon as we were in, they took us to the teachers' room; the room was a disaster because the thief revised everything and made a mess. While we were looking carefuly por a clue, I found a wallet with some money and a woman DNI, but I decided to keep it to interview her on my own.
    Later in the afternoon, I went to her house. She was very regretful of what she had done, so I told her that we could fix it...
    For the society, she was innocent at the end. That wallet never appeared at the school, so the thief made the perfect crime.

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  12. What I am going to tell happened on May 18, 1999 but I remember it as if it was yesterday. I arrived at “La Escuela De Lenguas” like any other day, I went upstairs and sat in the hall until my class started. At 5:55 pm the classroom was empty so I entered like any other day and sat in the same seat as always, everything was very normal.
    At 6:03 pm nobody had arrived and my class should have started, but I did not worry and I kept waiting. After 15 minutes there was no one there, so I went to check if something had happened. I went down the stairs to the reception and there was no one there...
    Suddenly the lights went out and the only thing I could see was a candle in room 1 so I went to take it but the doors closed and no matter how hard I fought it was useless because there was someone touching my shoulder...

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  13. It was a dark day and the lights weren't working at the institute. We were listening to a song from "the beatles" that the teacher Liliana had played on the computer, when we heard an explotion, the sound seemed to came from downstairs. I was more curious than afraid and my partners, too. We sent downstairs and found out that a computer had exploted.
    The teacher called 911 to stop the fire. The firemen arrived and started to do their job. When they were finishing, I remembered that I had a lot of money in my bag so I went upstairs as fast as I could but something strange had happened: our bags weren't in the room.
    I was trying to foud out how could this happened, and when i was going downstairs i heard the noise of the siren. At that moment I reallised that when we were looking at the broken computer and the smoke, a fireman went up and took our bags.
    I told my partners what had happened and they didn't believe me.

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  14. The mystery of the dogs
    As usal, I got up at 7:00 am and I went to my school. I felt so bad because a week ago my dog had dissapear. I only was better if I stayed with my friends. On Tuesday at 3:00 pm I went to the School of Languages. I talked with Martin, a classmate, and he felt sad too. His dog had dissapear yesterday and he was also so bad.
    While Martin anad I were talking, the teacher called us and we got into the class.Then I spent a beautiful day. It was a perfect day until I recived a call. It was a guy that studied at School of Languages and his dog had dissapear, too. As soon as, I finished talking with him, I had a brilliant idea. I knew another friend that had a dog and studied at School of Languages, too. We decided that we could use his dog like bait.
    We used his dog, anad a man took the dog and they went to the School of Langauges. He went to place that I didn´t know and there were a lot of dogs. Finally my dog and Martin´s dog were there and all the dogs were returned to their homes.

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  16. One day I was in my English class and I asked the teacher if I could go to he bathroom and she said yes. When I arrived at the bathroom I saw a boy that was dying. I don't know why but the first thing that I did was to touch him and I realised that he had a knife into his body. When I saw that, I ran to my room and I told to my teacher about the situation. I had blood in my body, in my hands, my head, everywhere! So everybody believed that I killed him. They called me "murderer", "you'll pay for it", "idiot", etc. The teachers took me to a room and I was there like five hours. Then my mother came and she asked me what happened. I told her the truth but she didn't believed me. Everyone believed that I was the killer. A few hours later, a detective walked into the room and started to ask me questions.
    Two hours later the detective said to me that the boy had commited suicide. He left a note that said "sorry, I can't, I want to die".
    I put that note...

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  17. This story is completely different from other stories. It's Tom's story. I never told this story before, so you are the first friend to read this:
    One day, I was at "Escuela De Lenguas" waiting for my class, and when the classroom were ready, I entered.
    The first thing that I saw was a boy on the floor with his eyes closed. For one second I think that it was a joke, but then when he didn't react, i realised that he was dead.
    I panikted when one of my classmates (called Alessia) entered. She started shouting and my teacher who was near the classroom heard her scream and came very fast.
    We didn't have classes that day because a lot of detectives were there analyzing the case, but I was very worried for the boy. A few days later I asked the institute and they said that the boy was Tom, a crazy guy. I was so interested about his incident that started an investigation (a friend helped me).
    I was thinking a lot and I have a conclusion: someone killed Tom.

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  18. It was a cloudy and rainy day. We had been having were in the second floor of the Escuela de Lenguas having classes and listening to the teacher when i heard something unusual coming from the first floor. I was afraid but maybe I was wrong, so I continued paying attention to the teacher.
    Immediately, er heard a shot so everyone stop doing what they were doing. The sound call the attention of all the students amd my classmate started to run to the first floor quicklky. When i went downstairs i saw a man pointing with a gun to a theacher. One friend tried to punch the thief but he enter to a classroom and he looked whit the teacher.
    Later, a student called the police looking for help. Ten minutes later two police officers came to Escuela de Lenguas. They entered in the room and they catched the thief. Luckily, he went to prision and paid for the try of theft.

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  19. May 29th
    It was a really rainy and windy Tuesday in La Plata. I was in my English institute with all my classmates. We are a lot of students in my class but us expected, on these rainy days only a few people leave their houses. Except that day, on May 29th, everyone showed up, and I must say, I wish we never did.
    The class started and it was being a really great day. I rembember we had a picnic. Everything was fine until something shut the door of our classroom really hard.
    Later, while we were trying to get the door open, the worst happened. A strong thunder sounded and then the power went out. While we were waiting for the light to return we heard a scream. At that moment, out of blue, the door opened. Very worried, we left our classroom running towards the place where the scream came from. When we got to the other classroom we found a group of policemen, a detective and another group of worried students. Nobody knew what was happening.
    A couple of hours later we couldnt leave the institute, the police wouldnt let us. The detective interviwed us every half an hour and we still didnt know anything about what had happend.
    At that moment the detective came into our classroom and told us that a student had been kidnapt during the blackout.
    Four years later we still dont know about that student but every 29th of May you can hear the scream of that girl as if she was here with us.

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  20. One day I was arriving at "Escuela de Lenguas" but many things were different. The sreets were empty and there was a mysterious feeling in the air. I passed a few people and they all seemed strange to me. When I finally arrived, I went upstairs to my classroom to waited for my teacher. I didn´t see anyone from school on my way. All the classroom doors were closed. I thought that the doors had to be open, but I kept walking. When I walked inside my class there was a girl on the floor with blood and I was really shocked, but I realized the importance of the situation and I thought about calling the police. I waited half an hour trying to wake up the girl and the police arrived. Then they asked me what had happened and I told them how I got there. They were taking her to go to the hospital when I saw a letter in her pocket. The letter said: “You are the next”. I started to run but when I was running downsairs I fell and I woke up. It was just a dream?

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  21. We were in class when we heard a scream that seemed to have come from the library. Once we got there we saw a teacher lying on the floor, we ran to her side and she told us what happened. She was on her way out when she heard noises coming from the backyard and she saw someone breaking the windows. She ran to the door but then she felt someone in her back, she turned around and saw a man with a ski mask. He told her to give him all her money and also the data base of the computer. She gave him both things, a bit confused about the data base, and the man pushed her to the floor landing on her back and making her scream.
    When we went to the backyard, we found the ski mask and strangely also the money. At that moment we realized that the thief had never wanted the money but now he had all of our information in his hands.
    Later the police came and analyzed the evidence, in which they found some fingerprints that led them to a man who was known for blackmailing people in exchange of money.
    We then received an email, asking for an amount of money. The police settled up a trap, but the thief ran away and was never caught. The good thing was that the information was later restored.

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  22. The missing computer
    It was October on Wednesday afternoon at Escuela de Lenguas when the secretary heard a strange noise on the second floor. It was the sound of a window breaking down, so she went up the stairs and when she was about to open a classroom door, she heard some noisy steps in the following room. When she walked into that room she couldn't see anyone, but there was a smashed window and one computer was missing. It was such a stressful situation for her, so she decided to call to the police station. After a few minutes the policeman arrived, interrogated the secretary and asked her to watch the security camera recording to start the investigation.
    Later the policeman got to the idea that the computer’s thief was Bob, one of Escuela de Lenguas neighbour. Then they went to Bob’s house and when he saw them he told all the truth and said that he had stolen it because his was broke and he thought that nobody at Escuela de Lenguas would realize that one computer was missing.
    Finally Bob gave the computer back to the secretary and agreed that if he paid the broken window, he wasn’t going to be sent to prison.


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  23. It was a warm night .I was walking around the neighbourhood with my mates,then,we realized that we were in the other side of the hood,the one who was far away from our houses,at the end of the street ,there was a really big and old house,we decided to explore the house,so we went from behind the house ,we opened and old window and we went inside.
    All the house was in a very bad state ,it looked like it haven´t been cleaned for years,everything was covered by webs.We went upstairs...
    As we were going up,we started listening like a weird and distorsioned sound .
    We enter inside of one the rooms upstairs,that one from were the sound was coming,we were looking at the door,it was locked.
    We forced the door and when we were inside the room,we saw a horrible and disturbing scene.
    There was a man looking at a Tv ,but nothing was sintonized on tv ,it was only static,and the man was dead.
    Next to the Tv ,there were a lot of tapes ,we saw one ,then we saw another,all the the tapes were about tortures and murderers and other kind of atrocities.
    We inmediately took the tapes to the police departament for examination.
    Nowadays ,they still try to find who is or who was the executer of this abominations.Maybe he escaped.... or maybe he is dead....

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  24. I was going to “Escuela de Lenguas” like every Tuesday and Thursday but this day I was felling very tired. When I arrived, I said “Hello” to the porter. It was always the same routine. I went to my classroom and I sat on my usual place. I was waiting with my friends when a man entered. He had dark hair, blue eyes and he was tall. He was wearing glasses and a lot of jackets, which was strange because we were in spring. He also had a bag. This man looked weird and he said that the teacher wasn´t coming that day and he was the substitute. When the class was finishing the man started to cry and said “Sorry”. We didn´t understand anything. Suddenly, a police woman entered saying “Keep calm please”. The man took off his jackets and showed a control with a button. I saw all my life, friends and family in my mind. I understood that it was a terrorist attack.

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  25. It was a summer night, when a new family moved to an old house that as at the corner of my street. But, after they have installed, no one at my neighborhood could saw any movement or life signal of them.
    At the nights, my sister and I always heard rare sounds. We were very curious about who were living there, if there was any boy or girl who could be our new friend, if they have pets or simply what were their names.
    One night my little sister, Lucy, came to me with the idea of enter in that strange house to investigate. We dressed all in black and got into the new neighborhood´s garden to see something through the window. We couldn´t see nothing so we decided enter in the house.
    They didn´t have any pets so it wasn´t very difficult get in by the back door. When we were there it was all dark and suddenly a boy appeared. We were scared and I couldn´t say nothing. The boys ran to me and he bitted my neck.
    I felt down and fitted, but not so long after I woke up on other room with a very thin and black woman, she explained to me that her husband and her son, the boy who bitted me, had a sickness in the skin and this was why they never get out and the only movements that we saw were at night.
    It was a very confused situation and I was ashamed for invaded their house, but she wasn´t hungry with us and she said that the bite thing was only a joke of her son.

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  26. Paranormal Things
    this story start in the School of Languges in La Plata, where people study and learn diferrent languages; but there'something wrong was going on here at night. There are empty classrooms wich doors open, cheairs move alone, and this is super stranger. Many teachers and students think that this things happend because twenty years ago a teeanger called sally jumped since the school roof and they say that her spirit might be trapped here; nobody knows why she did that to herself, some people say that she was affering brom deprssion; others say that she had problems in her house. Now many people thing that her spirit is in the school.
    Nowdays the problems with sally is growing; last week last week a teacher was heart by cheair that was flying in her classroom , when she was… alone; but the biggest problem was las Friday when some students found a dead body with something worte on his skin and it said “there wil be more dead” so the school paid to a priest for get out the spirit of sally , and he could, now there isn’t nothing strange in the school

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  27. MURDER AT THE SCHOOL OF LANGUAGES
    Everything happened on Tuesday 13th of April. My classmates and I were in classroom 8 waiting for our teacher, Ana. we were 12 but like a normal tuesday, agusto was absent so we were 11. It was 2.40 and the teacher hand't appeared but at 2.50 a tall man in a black suit opened the door, went inside the room and slammed the door shut. All of us were in silence and nobody understood what was happening. The strange man had a little notebook in his hand: it was black and read "detective Johnson", but why was there a detective in our class?
    After 5 minutes in complete silence Mr. johnson started to talk and he told us that our teacher had been murdered. Nobody knew what to say! All of us were shocked, the man was still talking and he said: "Nobody is going back home until the murderer is found."
    He started asking some questions in privateto each of all. everything was very strange and nobody understood why he was asking us. We were only students and that year was the second year we were with Ana and all of us thought that she was a nice teacher, but... not all of us. Mr. Johnson asked me if someone in the clas sthought bad things about Ana and at this moment I remembered that Augusto the previous class had said that he hated her because she gave us a lot of homework, and I told Mr. johnson this and he said: "Well, no w everything makes sense." I didn't understand what was happening. I couldn't think very well, but at that moment I didn't think that the murderer was Augusto. All the class was sitting in silence. Justo, Francisco, Iñaki and Alejo were with their cell phones. Renata and agustin were talking with Mr. Johnson. Micaela, Martina and iara were talking among themselves and Lautaro and I were in silence staring at the white wall.
    Mr. Johnson came back into the class and said: "Everyone can go home. The murderer is..." And a very tall man skinny man came into the class. He was Augusto. Augusto had murdered Ana. And I never went back to the School of Languages."

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  28. A STORY NOBODY WILL BELIEVE
    Las week Olivia died in Jóvenes 6 at 7 'o clock at the School of Languages. The detectives suspect it was a murder.
    Olivia was a great student. Nobody would have reasons to kill her. Some of her friends said that she was a wonderful frienb, but other classmates think she was a bully. In her class there used to be 6 students: Sara, the nerd of the class, Bautista, the funny guy, Ivan, the popular one, and Victoria, Olivia's best friend.
    The detectives questioned the whole class. after the questioning, the detectives concluded that Olivia was a bully. She had bullied Sara for a year. Sara sufered a lot so she decided to kill her with a knife at 7pm approximately in the classroom where everybody could see her. The knife was hidden in Victoria's desk. Sara was finally sent to prison.

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  29. BOYS TROUBLE
    Here I am. at the funureal of a girl everyone thinks was kind and sweet, but I am the only one who knows who she really was: a disloyal and awful friend. Listening to all their comments makes me angry so I just stand up and go outside.
    On my way home, I start to remember all the things she did to me, how my boyfriend cheated on me with her and the way she made fun of me and acted like she didn't care about our friendship.
    I can't stop thinking about what happened that day: we were at the School of Languages, and during the break, she was alone inside the classroom because she was always the last one to go to the break. When she went to the bathroom, someone attacked her from behind. This person put her head in the toilet and drowned her. She tried to resist but after a couple of minutes she was dead.
    I'm sure you are wondering why I know all these things...

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  30. THE SWEETEST DEATH
    The last class at the School of Languages, a really strange murder happened in room 8 at 3:29 pm. Twelve students were founf dead inside the classroom without any physical injuries. The Police have been investigating the crime scene these days. They have just found two clues: the first was three empty cans of insecticide Raid and the other clue was twelve identical cups almost full of dulce de leche. The teacher in charge of the students was in the bathroom at the exact moment of her death.
    Later, the scientists that investigated the students' bodies determined that they had been poisoned, but the Police had a doubt. what was the cause of the homicide? The insecticides or the dulce de leche?
    In the following two weeks, the Police kept investigating lots of papes at the library and in an October test they found a writing written by one of the students saying that the teacher owed a cup of dulce de leche for a picnic. Well, this was an interesting clue, but nothing was certain. they needed another clue.
    The Police interviewed the teacher and she ssaid that the students who died were mean and disrespectful. And when they asked about the insecticide she said that she didn't know anything about it. so, they had a very important clue, the case was almost closed because she was lying.
    when the Police caught the teacher, the director appeared and said that she used the insecticides to kill some mosquitos. The case was hard again. The second clue was discarded. So the detective in charge of the case was angry. He sat inside the room and he was very hyngry so he tried the dulce de leche.
    After three minutes, one of this teammates found him dead on the floor.

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  31. My friend is hiding something from me
    Lately my friend behaves differently. I feel like he has a very calm attitude, and that's weird because I've known him for a long time.
    We work together in the office, we have been working together for more than 10 years. Our work stresses us too much all the time, but these last days I noticed that my friend is very relieved, he has a better attitude than before.
    When we finished our day I asked him what he did to be well. He answered:
    -Oh… Nothing, I only do the Coff..Coff.. same things as always Coff..-
    -Are you okay? I hear your throat a little bad-
    -I´m fine don't worry Coff..Coff.. I have to go home as soon as possible to.. to take my medicine, see you Coff..-
    At that moment, I worried about him, it seemed like he was hiding something from me. Then, when I saw him at the exit of the agency he turned to the right, He usually comes home by train and the train station is turning to the left. He was definitely hiding something from me.
    So I started to follow him, I don't like that someone hide things from me, even a friend. He walked and kept walking until we were in front of a hospital. I understood that he went there to heal his throat, anyone would think about that. But that was not his end of the journey, he kept walking, he crossed the street and he entered a strange building. When he entered the building I approached to the entry and I read the title: “KARAOKE 24 hs”.
    Immediately I went in and I headed towards him who was talking to the man at the counter. He saw me and asked What was I there and I said:
    -Why did you not tell me you were going to karaoke? Why did you hide it for me? I was worry about you-
    He ducked his head and said:
    -Sorry Coff.., it's shameful to do a karaoke and I thought Coff...you would laugh at me.That's why I did not tell you-
    -Of course not, you are my friend and you will always count me for whatever-
    -Oh… Well Thanks,I started coming here for a few days ago because I heard that Coff… Coff...singing brings out your stress”-
    -Oh really, I could singing a little to be like you-
    -Try it, I recommend it. Coff… Coff..-
    -Another question, why are you coughing like that?-
    -Oh...that's because yesterday I tried to sing a heavy metal song and I damaged my throat.-
    -I see. Well, I´ll not sing that.-
    -Yea.. Better not Coff…. Coff… Coff…-

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  32. DETECTIVE STORY
    The School of Languages is a place where I feel at home after 6 years going there twice a week. I really enjoy going to class, but strange things have been happening recently... My homework disappeared every class, and the worst part is that my teacher never believed me so I needed to do something. I figured out that my problem was between the starting of the class and the first 15 minutes, so I decided to leave the room to go to the bathroom and i told JuanMa to look after my bag, where my homework was, but nothing happened that day. The following class we had another idea that consisted in doing the homework twice so when the thief handed in my work, the teacher would have two similar peapers, but it was a serious mistake, because that was the moment when the teacher realized that JuanMa and I were copying from each other.

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  33. No more investigations needed
    Last night, I woke up because my phone was ringing. When I picked it up, a voice told me that a crime had been committed at the Escuela de Lenguas. I dressed up as fast as I could, and I drove my car through the city to get to the scene.
    The headmistress explained to me that the alarm system had gone off and she had found the rooms in a complete disaster. I checked every single room and corridor, and I found the same pattern in each: the chairs facing the door, the walls all drawn with blue ink and a single letter on every board. When I finished, I wrote down the letters and I got this message: "NO MORE CLASSES".
    When the police arrived, they examined room by room, wall by wall, board by board and chair by chair. What did they get? More than 50 different fingerprints. An hour later, the results were ready. The head officer told us that the fingerprints were the janitor's and the door guard's. They were taken to the police station and interrogated.
    The only answer we got from them was that they had been preparing the school for the Halloween's activities.

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  34. Inception.

    The janitor was closing the institute when he found a very strange -and also scary- list.
    “- guns
    -headshot
    -suicide?
    -fake friends
    -loneliness
    -teachers
    -murder
    -clean crime scene
    -drugs???”

    He got afraid and decided to give it to the headmaster, who thought that something serious could be going on and appointed a meeting with the teachers to discuss the topic and try to find an explanation. They concluded that the list had been written by a student and came to the idea that someone could be planning a murder or a massive shooting.
    They decided to call the police, keep it as a secret and close the school for some days for prevention, but the rumors caused by the appearances of the security agents on the block started spreading very fast. The parents and the students went so mad that the school had to give classes again.
    The teachers decided to show the list on everyclassroom with the hope that the criminal would change his mind knowing that the plan was discovered. “Oh! That’s mine!” – Mathilda said- “That’s the list I wrote to organize my ideas for the Detective Story Contest.”

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  35. The Grey Owl

    One day during a very boring French class at the School of Languages, a student looked out of a window and saw a grey owl on a tree that was looking at him directly in the eyes, he tried to avoid it and concentrate on the class but every time he looked out of the window the strange animal was still there looking at him.
    The next class the owl was in the same place, in the same position and looking at him the hole hour and fifty minutes.
    The third consecutive class that the grey owl was there looking at him, he decided to ask a partner if she could see it and she answered no, which scared him very much.
    He returned to school the next week and the partner who couldn´t see the grey owl was not there. Outside the window on the same tree, there were now two grey owls looking directly at him...

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  36. i vote this one because is from the niga santiago

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