jueves, 2 de junio de 2016

e-mail writing

You are a movie director and you have a great idea for a spin-off of Big Fish. Write an email to your producer friends telling them about your idea!


8 comentarios:

  1. Dear producer,

    I´m writing this email to you because I have senn all of your series productions, and I have an idea for a new one, and I´d like to tell ypu about it!
    My idea for the pilot begins with a couple of kids playing at night in the swamp. this kids start talking about a legend that said that in this swamp there used to live a witch with a glass eye. and the best part is that in her eye you could see your own death.
    this kids wanted to know if the legend was true, so one of them went to the witch´s house, and the others stayed outside looking at him.
    when the kid knocked the door, the witch appeared.
    he really wanted to know about her eye, so he just asked politely about it.
    the witch was very happy becasuse usually, when people visited her, they were afraid, but this kid was not.
    in the end, the kid saw how he is going to die, but the audience could see that in the follow episode.
    I hope you like it, and tell me what you think!
    Best wishes, Sofia

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  2. Hi,Tom!
    I´ve been thinking about our new series and I thought of this. five children (Ruthir, Wilbur, Don, Zachy and Edward) who lived in Ashton. One day they went to a swamp on the outskirts of the city, which was dangerous because of the snakes, the spiders and the quicksand that existed there.
    A legend said that near the swamp lived a witch who had a glass eye which contained mystical powers, and if you looked directly you´d see how you were goung to die. The children were very scared but Edward decided to go inside the house. So he knocked the door and the witch opened it. He said nicely to the witch that he and his friends wanted to know how they were going to die. Two of them looked through the eye and they saw that they were going to die from an accident. Then Edward looked through the eye too... And we can finish the pilot there to generate intrigue in the kids so they want to see the next episode. What do you think? Do you like the idea? Well, I think the idea is going to work but I´m looking foward to your answer.
    Victoria

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  3. hello! I have an excellent idea to make a pilot of a series.

    The story could be about a group of friends that want to know if the legend that existed in Asthon was true . The legend said that a whitch who lived in a swamp near to Ashton had a glass eye that showed how you would die.
    One day the group of friends went to the swamp.The bravest of them , called Edward, went to the witch house to asked her if they could see their death .The witch accepted so she showed the guys her eye . One of them would die cause a heart attack and the other one would die falling of a ladder . And then Edward saw in her eye his death and it remains a mystery
    i hope you like my story .
    Carolina

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  4. Hi, Ian! I have a great idea for a series for children.
    Do you know the film Big fish? Well, the film is about a man called Edward Bloom and his life and his estranges experiences.
    My idea is to make a series about this film. The pilot could be about Edward and his new life in a ghost town. There, he will meet a giant, his new best friend and they will have a lot of adventures with the ghosts of the town.
    I think it is a good idea and the kids will really like it.
    I looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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  5. Hi Susi Gimenez,
    I have a great story for children,based in Big Fish:
    Once upon a time in a place called Alabama, there was a little boy, Edward, who always used to play with his friends in the sreet.
    They played everywhere except in one house; this house wasn´t a normal house, it was a big castle made of crystal that was so beautiful, but no one could get inside; except for the witch who lived there. She was a pretty woman but very special.
    This witch had a magic power, if you saw her eyes for ten seconds you would know how you are going to meet the love of your life.
    one dayt Edward was playing with a ball and accidentally he threw it to the castle. He went to the witch´s house to get back the ball, but he crashed into her and he couldn´t avoid look into her eyes, and at the moment his life changed forever.
    let me know what you think
    take care! bye!!
    Lautaro!!

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  6. Hi, Lily!
    I have seen a grat film,its name is Big Fish. It is about a man who has a lot of crazy stories during his life, some of them could be real but there are others that are impossible. I am going to write one example to you.
    Once upon a time when Edward, the main character, was fourteen years old, he had been with his friends in a witch´s house when his friends told him to look in the eye of the old witch. The witch told him how he and his friends were going to die. Afterwards Edward was never again afraid of anything because he knew that he was going to die

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  7. Hi John!
    I have a fantastic story about Big Fish for children. What do you think?
    A few years ago, Edward Bloom had been a winner in sports, in school and as person. He was saying that it was the best of Ashton. Until one day, a stranger appeared who was breaking people´s things, stealing sheep and eating dogs, corn fields,among others things. People wanted to kill the monster but Edward volunteered to go to speak with him and ask him to leave.
    When he came to the place where the giant was hiding, Edward told him to eat him because if that was not happening the village would think tha he wass a coward but the giant didn´t want to eat him. The only thing that the monster wanted was not to be so big. Edward made him understand that in fact he was not big but the village was too small for him and that the same was happening to him since the people were very small for his ambitions. So Edward asked him his name, which was Karl and told him that they would go away together from this village. Karl accepted and Edward prepared him to go to the city, dressing him with good clothes and cutting hair.
    When the Ashton people found out what Edward had achieved, they organized a small farewell where they gave to him the keys of the city and told him that he could return whenever he wanted. When they left Ashton, they found two paths, the old one is the one Edward took and the new one Karl took.
    I´m wating for your replay. I hope that interests you

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  8. Hi Robert,
    I have a great idea for a series for children based on 'Big Fish'.
    In the first episode, called 'The witch's eye', we will introduce the characters and the town where they live. Four kids who are friends go around looking for adventures.
    This episode is about these children who want to see the eye of the witch who lives in their town. The tale says that if you see her eye you will find out how you're going to die.
    I think if we include everything that kids like, a witch, a mysterious small town, a group of friends with different personalities, and maybe a catchy song, it's going to be a complete success!
    Well, i hope you like the idea.
    Take care.
    Mili

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